The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005
The table illustrates how the number of tourists travelling abroad changes from 5 regions in 4 different years Generally speaking, it can be clearly seen that the figures
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4 different areas Africa, Asia and the Pacific,
Europe
and
Middle
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East had an upward trend from 1990 to 2005
while
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America's
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one
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fluctuated mildly.
Additionally
, the total international travellers
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5 regions
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observed a sharp rise throughout the period. To be more specific,
Europe
saw the biggest
numbers
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of people who went
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international travel over the years. During the first half of the 15-year period, the figures
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Africa and
Middle
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East rose slightly by approximately 3
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.
Furthermore
, a remarkable growth
experienced
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by around 25
millions
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in both America and Asia and the Pacific areas. It is interesting to note that the number of foreign tourists in
Europe
soared significantly from 280.2
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to 390.3
millions
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. As for the latter half, the most noticeable changes
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registered in America, as the number saw a minimal decline of a mere 5
millions
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.
In contrast
, there was a gradual increase on average 5
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in
Europe
, Africa and
Middle
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East.
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similar pattern was seen in Asia and the Pacific, as the figure
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this
region
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by nearly 20
millions
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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