The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of armed
robberies
, assaults
and murders
occurred
in London between 2003 and 2012.
Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
Overall
, the number
of people committing armed robberies
declined whereas
for
the Change preposition
apply
number
of assaults
have
steadily increased. It is Correct subject-verb agreement
has
also
clear that the number
of murders
fluctuated from 2003 to 2012.
In 2003, armed robberies
accounted for the highest number
of crimes occurred
in London with approximately 3400 armed Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
robberies
. This
number
then
dropped to roughly 1100 in 2008 and climbed back to around 1500 in the years 2009 to 2012. By contrast
, the number
of murders
was the lowest between
the three crimes. Starting at approximately 500 Change preposition
among
murders
in 2003 after that the number
fluctuated and ended at roughly 600 murders
.
As for the number
of assaults
, the amount decreased at the beginning, going from almost 2500 to 2000 in the year 2006. This
number
then
increased steadily ending at approximately 2750 number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
assaults
in London.Submitted by saadaloutaibi54 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words robberies, assaults, murders, number with synonyms.
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