Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event : he done events and play band in many wedding ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.: we will provide you free tickets for maldives and support from another singer
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Dear Annie,
I hope you are doing well. I'm over the moon
by giving
you Change preposition
to give
news
that my sister getting married next month and she wants me to ask you Add an article
the news
that
if you can perform Correct word choice
apply
in
her wedding.
Well! You've Change preposition
at
great
band team and your team performed with the International Stars. Correct article usage
a great
Also
, everyone is fan
of your singing in my family .Add an article
a fan
Therefore
, I do not want to ask anyone else except you and it would be a great opportunity for you to perform at her wedding because other famous artist
like Daljit Dosanj Change the wording
another famous artist
other famous artists
also
invited . If you perform in front of big Add a missing verb
were also
artist
Fix the agreement mistake
artists
then
it would be a great deal for you to get feedback from professional
as well.
I hope you would say yes to me because my whole family is Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
fan
of your Add an article
a fan
punjabi
music. If you would like to perform at her wedding Change the capitalization
Punjabi
then
we would
definitely try to set up your meeting with your favourite artist and I'll pay for our 2 Wrong verb form
will
days
trip to Maldives which we planned earlier for next year. I'm waiting for your reply and I hope you will say yes to me.
Best wishes,
Roopkamal Kaur.Fix the agreement mistake
day
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language
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coherence
Try to enhance the logical flow and clarity by clearly separating different points into distinct paragraphs.
task
Provide more specific details on how the performance is expected to be organized to enhance response completeness.
tone
The letter maintains a friendly and suitable tone for the context, which is important for informal letters.
structure
The letter includes a proper greeting and closing, which is essential for coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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