Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.
Dear Maninder,
I hope
this
letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing this
letter to let you know that my sister's wedding will take place at
the Change preposition
in
last
week of July. As you are aware that
she likes Indian Classical Music Correct word choice
apply
alot
, Correct your spelling
a lot
therefore
, it would be great if can perform
at the wedding ceremony.
As a matter of fact, I know how good you are Wrong verb form
performed
in
Classical music and you Change preposition
at
had
won a few competitions with your group recently as well. Wrong verb form
have
Moreover
, I am very glad to know that you have opted music
as a profession. Change preposition
for music
Hence
, this
occasion will be a perfect place to showcase your talent.
Additionally
, I am more than happy to host your group for two days and I will pay a booking too because I want to be a helping hand in your journey to become a successful musician. I hope you will give a thought to this
offer.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours lovingly,
Jatinder.Submitted by mrsdns on
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