The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart show the number of visitors to three Londan Museums between 2007 and 2012. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the annual
number
of
visitors
to three London museums—
National
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the National
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Gallery,
British
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the British
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Museum
, and
Victoria
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the Victoria
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and Albert
Museum
—between 2007 and 2012. The figures are presented in millions.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the National Gallery attracted the highest
number
of
visitors
by
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in
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2012, reaching just over 15
million
people,
while
the lowest
number
of
visitors
was recorded at the
British
Museum
in 2008 and 2009, with around 6
million
visitors
. In detail, the National Gallery experienced a steady increase in
visitors
over the period. Starting at approximately 6
million
in 2007, the
number
of
visitors
gradually rose, with a particularly significant surge between 2011 and 2012, where it jumped by 5
million
to reach about 16
million
visitors
.
In contrast
, both the
British
Museum
and the Victoria and Albert
Museum
showed fluctuating visitor numbers. The
British
Museum
started at around 12
million
visitors
in 2007 but saw a sharp decline to 6
million
in 2008. The
number
remained stable until 2011
,
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when it spiked to 13
million
and
then
slightly increased to 14
million
in 2012. The Victoria and Albert
Museum
also
began with a strong attendance of around 14
million
visitors
in 2007, stayed stable in 2008, but
then
dropped to a low of 6
million
in 2010.
Afterward
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, it experienced a moderate recovery, reaching 10
million
visitors
by the end of the period.
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