The maps below show a cafe 10 years ago, 5 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a cafe 10 years ago, 5 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps illustrate changes that have been happening from 10
years
ago for a
cafe
.
Overall
, it is important that the
cafe
in the past did not have visible alternatives
while
now
this
place has a lot of area for its clients.
According to
the pictures, in 3 times, the entrance, between 2 several terraces, toilets, which
has been
Wrong verb form
is
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in the south-west of the
cafe
, food preparation, in the front of the toilets, and the cash desk, next to the terrace
are
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the same area as both 10 and 5
years
ago. In the previous, we can see 8 small
tables
in the centre of the
cafe
;
however
, today, they are replaced by 4 large
tables
. The graphs demonstrate that 10
years
ago terrace was not a region for customers;
nevertheless
, 5
years
ago they put
tables
on the terraces;
furthermore
, nowadays, not only the sector of terraces but
also
the figures of
tables
that are on the terrace are climbed from the prior
years
and they added a counter, which is between cash desk and toilets.
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