The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below represents the number of
items
transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by different mediums.
Overall
, the highest
tonnes
of
items
were transported by road and the lowest
tonnes
of
items
were transported by pipeline.
Moreover
, in the Initial
years
Add a comma
years,
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the
ratio
of transported goods by
water
and rail was the same ,
however
, after some years, the
ratio
of products transported by
water
increased significantly. To commence with, 70
million
tonnes
items
were transported by road which was the highest
ratio
as compared to other mediums and the lowest
ratio
of 20
million
tonnes
items
were transported by pipeline. The
ratio
of transported
items
by pipeline was around 10
million
tonnes
in the initial years but after some time it increased and remained at around 20
million
tonnes
till 2000.
On the other hand
, The products transported by
water
and rail were similar around 40
million
tonnes
,
however
, with the passage of time the
ratio
by rail remained the same and by
water
went to slightly more than 60
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words items, tonnes, ratio, water, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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