the table below shows population figures for countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

the table below shows population figures for countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
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The given table delineates the disparity among the numbers of citizens 4 different countries
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as well as
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how they are predicted to change in the next 5 decades.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the population of Argentina and Indonesia is believed to skyrocket
while
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the opposite is true for Italy in the given period.
To begin
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with, it can be seen that Indonesia is by far the most populous country surveyed in 2003 ( 238 ), which is predicted to experience a continuous rise until 2050, climbing up to 312.
Similarly
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, Argentina is
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projected to witness a considerable increase, from a low of only 34 to 48 and 62 in 2025 and 2050, respectively. With regard to Italy and the Republic of Korea, the population of the former was 6 million larger than that of the latter in 2003, at 54 and 48.
Nonetheless
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, just 2 decades later,
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a drop of 7,Italy will become the least populated country surveyed (47),
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the Republic of Korea is expecting a slight rise to 52 and remains at that value until 2050.
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