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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates what Anthropology students did after finishing their courses at one university,
along with
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 the salaries they earned five years later in different types of employment.
Overall
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, full-time
work
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 had the highest proportion among destinations. The most profitable type of employment is in the government sector, with 50 per
cent
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 earning over $100,000 after five years. In detail, full-time postgrad studies and those whose status is unknown shared the same percentage, 8 per
cent
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. The least preferred option after an undergraduate course was part-time
work
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 combined with postgraduate study, with only 5 per
cent
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. Part-time
work
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 and unemployment had similar rates, at 15 per
cent
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 and 12 per
cent
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, respectively.
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, 52 per
cent
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 of students planned to
work
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 full-time after graduating with a degree in Anthropology. Talking about salaries from each type of employment, freelance consultants had over a 40 per
cent
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 chance of earning both over $100,000 and between $75,000 to $99,999. Receiving a salary over $100,000 was 50 per
cent
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 likely for those in the government sector and 30 per
cent
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 for those in private companies. For earnings between $25,000 and $74,999, the rate was equal for both freelance consultants and the government sector,
while
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 private companies offered 10 per
cent
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 for earning $25,000 to $49,999 and 35 per
cent
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 for earning $50,000 to $74,999.

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