The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the provided line chart depicts the rate of the old-aged population from 1940 to 2040 in three highlighted countries.
Overall
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, all three countries witnessed an upward trend over the period shown.
In addition
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, a dramatic fluctuation in the statistics for the USA and Sweden can be seen during
this
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time. On the one hand, prior to 2020, the USA and Sweden had a higher level of senior citizens than Japan.
On the other hand
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, the population aged 65 and over in Japan overtake in 2020 and is 15%.
This
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rate will have been predicted to reach a peak of 25 % in Japan by 2040. As mentioned, it is obvious that old individual numbers slightly increased in the three countries before 2020 and climbed to a peak of 20% in Sweden.
However
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, the provided rate rose steadily in the USA during
this
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period and accounted for a negligible 5% in 2020.
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