The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line diagram illustrates the quantities of goods shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002 in millions by four varied methods of transport, road,
rail
, Use synonyms
water
, and pipeline.
Use synonyms
Overall
, all of the methods have a fluctuation between the years 1974 to 2002, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
road
is the most common way of transport with around 97 million tonnes and Add an article
the road
pipeline
is the least path for delivering goods.
Correct article usage
the pipeline
Rail
and Use synonyms
water
had an equal number in 1978 with roughly 40 tonnes Use synonyms
then
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water
increased gradually from 40 to 60 from 1982 to 1994, Use synonyms
although
, the Linking Words
rail
method had a sudden drop Use synonyms
in
1978 to 1986.
In the end, all of the methods were useful but the road was the most significant option for delivering the goods, Change preposition
from
secondly
, Linking Words
water
and Use synonyms
rail
had the same amount of tonnes in the past but Use synonyms
then
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water
got more acceptance, Use synonyms
finally
, the pipeline was the most unused path,Linking Words
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