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The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.

The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.
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This
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 bar chart describes
four
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 different ways of handling garbage in
four
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 urban areas / metropolises:
Toronto
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,
Madrid
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,
Kuala
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Lumpur
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 and
Amman
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. It can be easily seen that
Toronto
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 and
Amman
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 have rather similar allocations of
waste
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 into
four
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 processing
methods
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: burying it, burning it completely, recycling and making
into
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it into
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 composite,
while
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 the capital cities of Spain and Malaysia have quite different ones as compared with the former. In terms of individual
methods
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, compositing is the least used in these cities.
Toronto
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 transports the highest percentage of trash to dumping grounds, which accounts for around 75 % of its total
waste
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.
In contrast
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, the other three
methods
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 are employed merely in
Toronto
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, which is only around 10
percent
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per cent
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 and below. Like
Toronto
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,
Amman
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 - the capital city of Jordan uses the method of dumping the most, which makes up approximately 48% of its total
waste
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.
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,
the
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apply
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incineration, which is the second most used method in
Amman
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, has a much higher percentage than that of
Toronto
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.
Amman
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’s incineration constitutes nearly 38%.
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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employes
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employ
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the
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apply
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incineration the most among the
four
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methods
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. In
Madrid
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, it accounts for 40 % of the city’s total
waste
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. In
Kuala
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Lumpur
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, it constitutes roughly 55% of the city’s aggregate amount of garbage. The other three
methods
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 show different patterns in
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, toronto, madrid, kuala, lumpur, amman, waste, methods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • method
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • comparison
  • similarity
  • difference
  • variation
  • percentage
  • bar chart
  • trend
  • dominant
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • proportion
  • city
  • data
  • figure
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