The graph below shows the hospital admissions for five hospitals in a European country from 2004 to 2018.

The graph below shows the hospital admissions for five hospitals in a European country from 2004 to 2018.
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admissions
for different five medical
centers
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, which were located in a European country between 2004 and 2018.
Overall
, all the hospital
admissions
for hospitals increased, but exceptions were for Oxley which had declined and Fortsmith which remained stable over
this
period. In 2004, the highest hospital
admissions
were for Oxley with just under 250. Afterwards, Bardley was the second highest with about 200 and the gap between Bardley and Fortsmith was tight and
admissions
for these two hospitals were nearly the same.
Then
, the
admissions
for Adlin and Stanton were roughly 120 and 80, respectively.
However
, in 2018, the statistics were not the same as in 2014. The gap between Bardley and Fortsmith had widened and the
admissions
for them were about 270 and 200, respectively.
Furthermore
, hospital
admissions
for Adlin rose considerably to about 250 over
this
fourteen-year period. And
then
, there was
slight
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hospital
admissions
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called Stanton.
By contrast
,
admissions
for Oxley decreased sharply to nearly 100.
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