The graph shows the average house prices in three countries between the years 1997 - 2014

Standard home price between 1997 and 2014.

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some years, it had a dramatic growth until 2007. In 2007, it was $250k, but it decreased a little to around $150k after increasing again. Between 2009 and 2014, it did not change

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started from $155k, and it had a great increase until 2005. In 2005, it was $270k.

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, and it was around $250k. Between 6 years, it increased slightly to around $500k. It was in 2014. When it comes to

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started at $200k in 1997, and it grew a little in 2000; it was $225k.

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, it increased extremely to around $520k in 2003. But it decreased a little, approximately $480k in 2006. Between 2006 and 2014, it had only growth. In 2014, it was about $600k.

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