The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.
The two maps illustrate comparisons of the town centre from 1990 with the current area today.
In general, the region has undergone many changes including relocation and some new construction.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, individual houses in the South of the city and on the left of Green Street were reconstructed into an apartment block.
Besides
, a bank in the East opposite the neighbourhood hall and on the right of Oldfield Street was replaced by a cafe which was moved from the North.
Related to the building, lines for pedestrians were added to all streets. In addition
, some areas such
as the office of a newsagent, grocery, bakery, and butcher shop were abolished and combined into a current shopping mall. However
, there are some places that did not relocate or rebuild until nowadays such
as the park, library, town hall, and the bank at the Eastern corner.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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