The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The bar graph shows the comparison between the initial annual salary of various UK occupations to their wages 3 years later. The table
on the other hand
provides information on the average working
hours
of each profession.
Firstly
, all occupational salaries showed positive growth over 3 years. Underground drivers showed a minor increase of 2000
pounds
resulting in 52,000
pounds
annually.
This
is followed in turn by firefighters whose 40,000 annual salaries showed a higher rise of 3000
pounds
. Teachers meanwhile showed a mild increase of 2000
pounds
resulting in 32,000. Nurse's salaries
on the other hand
showed only a slight rise going from 17,000 to 19,000. The salary of police officers showed minimal growth over the 3 years going from 22,000 to 23,000.
Secondly
, when comparing the average working
hours
of all these professions. Teachers and firefighters had the busiest week with a total of 55
hours
.
This
is
subsequently
followed by police officers at 40
hours
. Nurses and underground occupations required the least number of
hours
at 38 and 36
hours
respectively.
To sum up
, when comparing all professions underground workers earned the most amount of money for the least amount of time worked.
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