The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data is shown as a table which compares changes for figures of average
miles
travelled per person in relation to modes
of travel from 1985 to 2000.
At first glance, all transport
methods constituted increasing distance commuted throughout the period except for bicycles, walking, and local buses, with cars being most popular amongst them.
In terms of growing interest in transport
forms, by the end of 2000, number
of distances travelled Change the article
a number
the number
for
taxis (13 Change preposition
by
miles
) and local distance buses(54 miles
) had witnessed a more than twofold increase to 42 miles
and 124 miles
, respectively. In comparison, between 1985 and 2000, cars(3199 miles
), trains(289 miles
), and other transport
modes
(450 miles
) accounted for moderate change in destinations covered, 4806m, 366m, and 585m, accordingly
.
Regarding popularity between them, cars were attributed as the most utilized transport
method , constituting approximately two-thirds of all modes
. Whereas
local buses were more prominent in exploitation than trains in 1985, in 2000 figures for trains outstripped the former, being third most popular after Other modes
. However
, taxis and bicycles were the least preferable choices among citizens, reaching 42 miles
and 41 miles
per resident, respectively.Submitted by IELTS nis
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