The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the
number
of
tourists
visiting a Caribbean
island
, categorized by those staying on
cruise
ships and those staying on the
island
, between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of visitors steadily increased over the years.
Initially
, more
tourists
preferred staying on the
island
than on
cruise
ships, but by the end of the period, the
number
of
cruise
ship passengers surpassed those staying on the
island
. In 2010, the
number
of visitors on
cruise
ships was relatively low at 0.25
million
.
This
figure fluctuated slightly between 2010 and 2013, before rising steadily to reach 2
million
by 2017.
In contrast
,
tourists
staying on the
island
began at 1.5
million
in 2010, holding steady for a year before climbing to 2
million
by 2013.
After
this
rise, the
number
plateaued for the remainder of the period, with minor fluctuations in 2016. In summary, both categories of
tourists
showed significant growth over the seven-year period.
While
the
number
of
cruise
ship passengers began
lower
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, it increased fourfold, eventually exceeding the
number
of
island
stayers by 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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