The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the
number
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of
tourists
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visiting a Caribbean
island
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, categorized by those staying on
cruise
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ships and those staying on the
island
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, between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of visitors steadily increased over the years.
Initially
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, more
tourists
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preferred staying on the
island
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than on
cruise
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ships, but by the end of the period, the
number
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of
cruise
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ship passengers surpassed those staying on the
island
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. In 2010, the
number
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of visitors on
cruise
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ships was relatively low at 0.25
million
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.
This
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figure fluctuated slightly between 2010 and 2013, before rising steadily to reach 2
million
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by 2017.
In contrast
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,
tourists
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staying on the
island
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began at 1.5
million
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in 2010, holding steady for a year before climbing to 2
million
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by 2013.
After
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this
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rise, the
number
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plateaued for the remainder of the period, with minor fluctuations in 2016. In summary, both categories of
tourists
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showed significant growth over the seven-year period.
While
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the
number
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of
cruise
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ship passengers began
lower
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, it increased fourfold, eventually exceeding the
number
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of
island
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stayers by 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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