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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
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The chart illustrates data about different occupations and their income in the United Kingdom,
while
 the table demonstrates the average
hours
 of
work
 for each profession per 7 days.
Overall
, underground
drivers
 have the best salary both in the period of starting and after 3
years
,
although
 they
work
 less than other professions, meanwhile nurses get the minimum during all of the time, despite working nearly the same
hours
 as subway
drivers
.
In addition
,
it is clear that
 neither of the professions has noticeable changes in their salaries in 3
years
.
However
, nurses get the minimum wage among other occupations, constituting nearly 15.000
pounds
 when started, but even after 3
years
 they still have the lowest income of just above 20.000
pounds
. The
least
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last
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 changes in salaries when started and after 3
years
 are observed in police, as they still get a bit over 20.000
pounds
. The top 3 professions with the highest salaries are teachers, firefighters and underground
drivers
, who get more than 30.000, 40.000 and 50.000
pounds
 respectively in both periods. Obviously, underground
drivers
work
 the least
hours
, which makes up 36
hours
 a week. Nurses and police
work
 a little bit more than subway
drivers
, 38 and 40
hours
 respectively. Teachers and firefighters have the highest
hours
 of
work
,
furthermore
, they are the same, particularly 55
hours
 per 7 days, which is the maximum of
this
 table.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, work, drivers, years, pounds with synonyms.
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