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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
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The chart illustrates data about different occupations and their income in the United Kingdom,
while
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 the table demonstrates the average
hours
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 of
work
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 for each profession per 7 days.
Overall
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, underground
drivers
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 have the best salary both in the period of starting and after 3
years
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,
although
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 they
work
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 less than other professions, meanwhile nurses get the minimum during all of the time, despite working nearly the same
hours
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 as subway
drivers
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.
In addition
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,
it is clear that
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 neither of the professions has noticeable changes in their salaries in 3
years
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.
However
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, nurses get the minimum wage among other occupations, constituting nearly 15.000
pounds
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 when started, but even after 3
years
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 they still have the lowest income of just above 20.000
pounds
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. The
least
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last
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 changes in salaries when started and after 3
years
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 are observed in police, as they still get a bit over 20.000
pounds
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. The top 3 professions with the highest salaries are teachers, firefighters and underground
drivers
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, who get more than 30.000, 40.000 and 50.000
pounds
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 respectively in both periods. Obviously, underground
drivers
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work
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 the least
hours
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, which makes up 36
hours
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 a week. Nurses and police
work
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 a little bit more than subway
drivers
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, 38 and 40
hours
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 respectively. Teachers and firefighters have the highest
hours
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 of
work
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,
furthermore
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, they are the same, particularly 55
hours
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 per 7 days, which is the maximum of
this
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 table.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, work, drivers, years, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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