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Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers don’t need a training course. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There are some people who believe that to be a capable teacher, a training course is needed,
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 others think that a training course is unnecessary.
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 unprepared. On the one hand, some who think that teaching does not require any preparation assume that training courses are a waste of
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. They believe that the way that you learn is the same way as you teach,
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 not quite right. The reason is that humans cannot fully understand a concept for the first
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, they need
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 to practice repeatedly. For
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example, scientists say that
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 and a lower percentage of that they can teach to others.
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, I believe that humans cannot teach perfectly without practice over some
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, a number of individuals think that teaching is a skill that needs to be nurtured. During a class, there are many
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 with different backgrounds who are learning the same topic, and a professor is trying to explain a lesson using a wide range of vocabulary and paraphrasing to
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students
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 who have diverse levels of understanding.
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, I believe that having
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 some think that participating in teaching courses is a waste of
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 and effort, I believe that teaching is a very difficult skill to master and requires long hours of classes.

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task response
Explore each viewpoint more thoroughly and provide clearer transitions between ideas. More specific examples can enhance your argument.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a consistent flow by linking your ideas more cohesively. Minor structural improvements will make it easier for the reader to follow your argument.
coherence cohesion
Avoid minor grammatical inaccuracies and ensure clarity in your expressions. Refining these areas can enhance your coherence and cohesion score.
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Your introduction clearly presents both viewpoints and sets up the discussion effectively.
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You have provided a well-rounded conclusion that effectively summarizes your stance.
coherence cohesion
The essay is logically structured, guiding the reader smoothly from one point to the next.
coherence cohesion
Your main points are generally well-supported and clear.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pedagogical skills
  • Classroom management
  • Effective communication
  • Educational techniques
  • Student engagement
  • Natural talent
  • Subject mastery
  • Formal training
  • Theoretical knowledge
  • Real-life teaching scenarios
  • Adaptability
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Financial and time burdens
  • Continuous professional development
  • Evolving educational environments
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