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The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and today.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whererelevant.

The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and today.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The given maps illustrate changes in a
beachfront
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 in Australia in 1950 and the present.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 a
beachfront
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 was filled with fewer facilities in the past,but during the next 74 years,it has changed significantly. In the year 1950,the most noticeable was that the road which was in the northern-west part of the area had been expanded until the Lighthouse which is in the southeast part of the
beachfront
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.
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,the playground which was near the dining tables has been replaced with a parking area.
According to
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 the map,the pool has been expanded to 50 m from 25 and there is a new restaurant and surf club which have been established in the space of empty land in the southwest of a
beachfront
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.
In contrast
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,a surf club has been installed above the Lighthouse which is opposite of the same club.
However
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,facilities namely pavilion and dining tables stayed unchanged.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words beachfront with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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