the charts shows the number of birds in Wollai Park between 1990 and 2010 Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where nessesary

the charts shows the number of birds in Wollai Park between 1990 and 2010

Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where nessesary
The diagram illustrates the
number
of bird
species
in Wollai Park in 20 years between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
while
the graph exhibits frequent oscillations between 5 types of
birds
, most of the
number
of every bird
species
generally decreases at a certain level.
Nevertheless
, some roughly plateaued at the same amount
at the end
, and some dwindled significantly. On the one hand, the parrots and the swallows seem to be maintained at the initial amount.
Initially
, the parrots'
population
was between 0.8 and 0.7 and virtually the same in 2010,
however
, the
population
met its apex around 1995 at 900
birds
, keeping themselves to be the largest in the pool of bird
species
- after exceeding the Kookaburras and crows between 1990 and 1995. In the case of the swallows, not only did it continue to be the lowest in the numbers of the
species
,
while
the
population
was between 300 and 200
birds
and reached its lowest in 2005 with 100
birds
, it returned to 200
birds
in 2010.
On the other hand
, the
number
of crows has decreased consistently and lost 300
birds
in the 20-year interval, with its initial amount reaching 900
birds
as the highest
number
in 1990. The kookaburras ,
nevertheless
, lost twofold of what the crows have lost with the same starting
number
of the
population
. Interestingly, in the whip
birds
’ cases, it lost 40% of its
population
, making it having less than 300
birds
in 2010.
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