the charts shows the number of birds in Wollai Park between 1990 and 2010 Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where nessesary
The diagram illustrates the
number
of bird species
in Wollai Park in 20 years between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, while
the graph exhibits frequent oscillations between 5 types of birds
, most of the number
of every bird species
generally decreases at a certain level. Nevertheless
, some roughly plateaued at the same amount at the end
, and some dwindled significantly.
On the one hand, the parrots and the swallows seem to be maintained at the initial amount. Initially
, the parrots' population
was between 0.8 and 0.7 and virtually the same in 2010, however
, the population
met its apex around 1995 at 900 birds
, keeping themselves to be the largest in the pool of bird species
- after exceeding the Kookaburras and crows between 1990 and 1995. In the case of the swallows, not only did it continue to be the lowest in the numbers of the species
, while
the population
was between 300 and 200 birds
and reached its lowest in 2005 with 100 birds
, it returned to 200 birds
in 2010.
On the other hand
, the number
of crows has decreased consistently and lost 300 birds
in the 20-year interval, with its initial amount reaching 900 birds
as the highest number
in 1990. The kookaburras , nevertheless
, lost twofold of what the crows have lost with the same starting number
of the population
. Interestingly, in the whip birds
’ cases, it lost 40% of its population
, making it having less than 300 birds
in 2010.Submitted by bendy.anhle on
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