You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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apply

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many people believe that governments have to impose some restrictions in order that decrease the rate of pollutants

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on environment and housing complexities to avert the widespread miscellaneous types of disorder. I subscribe to the notion that some illnesses

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from building maintenance conditions

such

as bacterial and fungal

diseases

,meanwhile, a range of disorders result from

environmental

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the environmental

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pollution in which humans play direct and indirect roles leading to a quiet number of waterborne plus soil-borne

diseases

; even though all illnesses are not limited in those categories because of the genetical disorder have grate proportions which officials should be aware of them. governments must tighten up regulations to conserve buildings, especially some houses located in humidity or cloudy areas since those kinds of weather is a suitable

terms

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for duplicating

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and bacteria. Italy is a significant illustration because that country is ancient

as well

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most of the constructs and infrastructures have been old;

Besides

the state is located near the Mediterranean Sea,

hence

there is an appropriate place for breeding mould bringing to mental, aspersions plus digestive poisoning prevailing in that

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.

secondly

, some

diseases

are led by

humans

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activities including pure waste water to soil or sea which

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on food chain since that kind of pollutant is consumed by animals and vegetation, ultimately eaten by humans, to result in

diseases

.

Hence

not only should the government provide rigid regulations but

also

dedicate a budget in order to safeguard the old buildings in special zones and to prevent human activities bearing detrimental effects on nature.

on the other hand

, some types of illnesses come from genetic problems and

mutation

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which

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governments have to allocate sophisticated funds to universities and prepare suitable situations for experts in order to quest , predict and warn .

for instance

, Coronavirus is one of the mutation

diseases

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its effect has remained till now . as outlined above, officials have to pass laws not only to prevent various types of bacterial on fungal

diseases

derived from poor maintenance houses and environmental pollutants but

also

to provide the budget for

genetical

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disorder research because it would be an intensive issue in future if experts did not quist about it .