The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table and chart provide data about
police
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the police
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budget between 2017 and 2018 in a certain area of Britain. The table depicts the sources of money that came from and the chart demonstrates how it was spent in three fields namely
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, technology, buildings and transport.
Overall
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, In both years, the main source of money for
police
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the police
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budget
were
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was
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national
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the national
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government and
this
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money
largely
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was largely
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spent on
thr
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the
salaries
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of officers and staff. The total revenue had increased from 304.7 million
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euro
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euros
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to 318.6 million
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euro
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euros
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. Notably, In one
years
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, all
type
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types
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of sources experienced
gradual
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a gradual
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rise
by
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of
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13.9 million
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in totaly
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totaly
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total
. National Government
grow
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over 2.3 m
euro
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,
while
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local taxes surged from 91.2 to 102.3 respectively. Other sources
such
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as grants rise slightly from 38 m
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euro
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euros
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to 38.5
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euro
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euros
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. In 2017, the expenditures were mostly spent on
salaries
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with 75
percentage
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per cent
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, 17
for
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on
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building and transport, and only 8 proportion
for
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on
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the
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apply
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technology. After
year
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the year
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, the percentage of
salaries
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droped
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dropped
steady
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steadily
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6
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to 6
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percent
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per cent
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.
Although
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proportion
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the proportion
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of
building
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buildings
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and transport remained
same
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the same
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,
the
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apply
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technology
grow
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grew
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considerably from 8 to 14 percentage within from 2017 to 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, euro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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