The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions)  of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The bar chart illustrates the type of telephone calls including local, national and international, and mobiles used by
British
people
from 1952 to 2002. The units were expressed in billions of
minutes
.
Overall
, the local
line
was the highest used
line
despite experiencing some increases and decreases.
On the other hand
, The national and International lines, which were
also
fixed, and the mobiles (all calls) experienced an upward trend over the period. The
British
people
with the local
line
used more than 70
billion
minutes
in 1995
whereas
mobile calls and the national and international lines accounted for less than 5
billion
and less than 40
billion
, respectively. In 1999, the local fixed
line
reached the highest amount of used
minutes
throughout the period, which was 90
billion
. The national and international lines witnessed a gradual increase to 50
billion
in 1999.
Additionally
, mobile calls were more than 10
billion
which was more than 5 times compared to 1995. In 2002, most
minutes
(about 70
billion
) were used
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despite having a sharp drop. In terms of the national and international calls, 60
billion
minutes
of calls were done in 2002 which was 10
billion
minutes
higher than that in 1999. Regarding mobile calls, it was the least used operator by
British
people
in 2002 though it was 4 times higher than that in 1999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, people, minutes, line, billion with synonyms.
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