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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The bar chart illustrates the type of telephone calls including local, national and international, and mobiles used by
British
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people
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 from 1952 to 2002. The units were expressed in billions of
minutes
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.
Overall
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, the local
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 was the highest used
line
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 despite experiencing some increases and decreases.
On the other hand
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, The national and International lines, which were
also
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 fixed, and the mobiles (all calls) experienced an upward trend over the period. The
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people
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 with the local
line
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 used more than 70
billion
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minutes
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 in 1995
whereas
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 mobile calls and the national and international lines accounted for less than 5
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 and less than 40
billion
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, respectively. In 1999, the local fixed
line
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 reached the highest amount of used
minutes
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 throughout the period, which was 90
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. The national and international lines witnessed a gradual increase to 50
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 in 1999.
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, mobile calls were more than 10
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 which was more than 5 times compared to 1995. In 2002, most
minutes
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 (about 70
billion
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) were used
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British
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people
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 using local fixed
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line
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 despite having a sharp drop. In terms of the national and international calls, 60
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minutes
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 of calls were done in 2002 which was 10
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minutes
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 higher than that in 1999. Regarding mobile calls, it was the least used operator by
British
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people
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 in 2002 though it was 4 times higher than that in 1999.
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