in many countries today, crime novels and tv crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. why do you things these tv shows and books are popular what is your opinion of crime fictions and tv dramas

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It is a fact that

crime

novels and

crime

dramas

are

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have

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having

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larger

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audience worldwide,

due to

their capacity to hook the reader and the realism and real facts that are

invove

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involved

involve

in the histories.

Althought

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Although

are a public interest, I believe they should be

baned

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banned

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. the essay will argue

this

, and I will provide my opinion. In the past few years, novels and

shows about criminology are

rasing

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raising

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their

audence

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audience

due to

their capacity to keep the

audence

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audience

hooked, increasing the

number

of the

audence

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audience

, as

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a consecuence

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consecuence

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consequence

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of a

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big

developing

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development

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this

industry.

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, Netflix

had

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invested in the past 10 years more than 10 billion dollars in the development of

this

gender.

Furthermore

, many of the histories are real cases, or at least

they

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the

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authors try to

convice

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convince

the audience of that, adding an extra hooker point to

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its

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audience.

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Although

, everyone knows about their populism, I

belive

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believe

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that

shows and novels related

with

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crimes

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crime

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should be baned,

Becuase

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because

it has

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the

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incredible power of encouraging new generations to commit

crime

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crimes

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, leading to,

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not

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only a major

number

crime

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crimes

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, but

also

violence on the streets. A clear example,

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a quiz in Argentina

has

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that has

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shown that

the

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apply

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85% are feeling bad thoughts after watching

crime realated

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crime-related

movies or series.

To sum up

Albeit

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Despite

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the increasing

number

of their

audence

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audience

due to

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its

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capacity of hooking,

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apply

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we can

compared

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compare

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with

real life

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real-life

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cases. I believe

this

gender should be

baned

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banned

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from

and libraries because it

lead

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leads

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to raising the

number

crime

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crimes

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and violence on the streets.

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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264 words

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