Your city has approved a weekly market in your area but you are dissatisfied with this decision. Write a Letter to your city council. In this letter write Why you are writing Explain problems caused by this Suggest a solution/Alternative
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am reaching out to express my disappointment with the approval of the Weekly Farmer's
Market
in the neighbourhood of Abbotsford.
I am a resident of the city of Abbotsford. Ever since the market
was introduced, every Sunday, in the area people have been experiencing some problems. Therefore
, I firmly believe that this
decision should be reconsidered.
Not only, the market
has contributed significantly in
making traffic conditions worse, but Change preposition
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also
the presence of this
market
has snatched the only available park in the locality from the children. Moreover
, due to
the minimal availability of parking near the setup, cars are often parked and left unattended on both sides of the road throughout the day leaving no space for vehicles to pass.
Consequently
, it would be much better if the market
is relocated and the most appropriate place would be near WJ Mouat School, which is currently closed for vacations. So, this
location would not only accommodate the vendors but also
has
ample parking space which can be utilised by the customers.
I hope my suggestions Correct subject-verb agreement
have
would
be considered and your immediate consideration on Wrong verb form
will
this
matter would be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Pranav Dhawan.Submitted by pranav.dhawan28 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single, clear idea relevant to the topic. Perhaps you could split the paragraph discussing traffic conditions and children's loss of the park into two separate paragraphs to enhance readability.
task achievement
You may wish to elaborate a bit more on each problem to provide a fuller response. Consider adding details on how traffic issues affect daily life or why the park is crucial for the community.
task achievement
The letter clearly addresses all the required points: reason for writing, problems caused by the market, and a suggested solution.
task achievement
The tone is polite and appropriate for a letter to the city council.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure, beginning with an introduction, followed by explanation of problems, and concluding with a suggestion.
coherence cohesion
Excellent use of greeting and closing, making the letter look formal and respectful.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite