The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Vietnam in 1999 and 2019. Summarize the information shown by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Vietnam in 1999 and 2019. Summarize the information shown by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
everage
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average
household expenditures by Major
Caterories
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categories
in Vietnam in 1999 and 2019. Overview, in 1999, the percentage of others accounted for the highest proportion, at 36% of the total expenditure. The
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for food were only 24%. The
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for housing and education were slightly lower, at 16% and 12% respectively. Meanwhile, only 9% of the total expenditures were by transportation and
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in the percentage of average household expenditures by healthcare was just 3%. In 2019, the percentage of food went up significantly but remained the highest figure in the chart at 30%. Housing just increased 5% compared to 1999. Transportation extremely rose more than
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at 17%. Education
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year slightly increased by just 4% and
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increased after at least ten years. They went down sharply to 9% and 6% in the
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for healthcare
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others respectively. After ten years something increases and something decreases sharply. The following year may go up even higher.
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