The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selectih and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selectih and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the common amount changed on a monthly basis of three metals during 2014 in percentage.
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, it can be seen from the diagram Nickle was the most impacted than others.
Whereas
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zinc was the lowest at the starting time and it increased
at the end
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of the year.
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, copper showed a slight decline in the final month. It is conspicuous that the nickel was 6% in the month of
January
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2014, which fell dramatically and reached its lowest point of -0.3% in June and became constant from July to September touching -0.1%, it experienced some fluctuations and hit 1% in December.
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, all metals plunged from
January
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to June and became unchanged till September after that all augmented to certain levels. Probing ahead, zinc was 1% in
January
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and it rose abruptly till February
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, it experienced some movements and touched 0.5% in July after that it increment and
lastly
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attained 2% in December.
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, nickel was at 2% in
January
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and it displayed a marginal plummet and touched 1% in July
finally
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, it hit 1.5% in December after some oscillations.
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