Your friend invited you to his party but your are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you can’t come 2. Give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner 3. Suggest another time to meet
Dear friend
I am apologising to you
reason
Add an article
a reason
the reason
of
I can't Change preposition
apply
come
your party. Because I have scheduled another plan next month. We planned to travel Add the preposition
come to
another
city and already booked the hotel, Change preposition
to another
flight
. Before I told you Correct word choice
and flight
the
New York Correct article usage
apply
city
Capitalize word
City
is
my Wrong verb form
was
dreaming
city. I got a chance to visit Replace the word
dream
to
New York for three weeks.
If I can't contact you, don't worry, I will spend time with my family and I will not use international phone Remove the preposition
apply
call
. Fix the agreement mistake
calls
However
, I can send you email
every week. If you have any Add an article
an email
order
from the United States, you can send me Fix the agreement mistake
orders
email
anytime. I will Add an article
an email
recieve
pleasure.
I hope, your party will be fantastic and I am Correct your spelling
receive
wating
Correct your spelling
wanting
waiting
some
good news from you. We will Change preposition
for some
back
after Add a missing verb
be back
new
year. We can meet before Add an article
the new
spring
holiday. I am so thankful for your Correct article usage
the spring
invitationNext
time we will meet enjoyable.
Sincerely, your bestie NBCorrect your spelling
invitation next
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to provide a clearer and more logical structure. For example, use paragraphs to separate your reasons for not attending, explaining the delay in informing, and suggesting the new meeting time.
Task Response
Make sure to use more accurate grammar and vocabulary. For example, 'I am apologising to you reason of I can't come your party' should be 'I am sorry I can't come to your party.'
Task Response
The letter has a friendly and sincere tone, which is appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The closing and greeting are appropriately used, making it clear who the letter is for and maintaining a friendly tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite