Your friend invited you to his party but your are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you can’t come 2. Give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner 3. Suggest another time to meet

Dear friend I am apologising to you
reason
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a reason
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of
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I can't
come
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come to
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your party. Because I have scheduled another plan next month. We planned to travel
another
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city and already booked the hotel,
flight
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and flight
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. Before I told you
the
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New York
city
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is
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was
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my
dreaming
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city. I got a chance to visit
to
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New York for three weeks. If I can't contact you, don't worry, I will spend time with my family and I will not use international phone
call
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.
However
, I can send you
email
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every week. If you have any
order
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from the United States, you can send me
email
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anytime. I will
recieve
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receive
pleasure. I hope, your party will be fantastic and I am
wating
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wanting
waiting
some
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good news from you. We will
back
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after
new
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the new
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year. We can meet before
spring
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the spring
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holiday. I am so thankful for your
invitationNext
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invitation next
time we will meet enjoyable. Sincerely, your bestie NB
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to provide a clearer and more logical structure. For example, use paragraphs to separate your reasons for not attending, explaining the delay in informing, and suggesting the new meeting time.
Task Response
Make sure to use more accurate grammar and vocabulary. For example, 'I am apologising to you reason of I can't come your party' should be 'I am sorry I can't come to your party.'
Task Response
The letter has a friendly and sincere tone, which is appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The closing and greeting are appropriately used, making it clear who the letter is for and maintaining a friendly tone.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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