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The table and the pie charts illustrate the number of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment and the results of surveys of visitor gratification during the same two periods.

The table and the pie charts illustrate the number of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment and the results of surveys of visitor gratification during the same two periods.
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The table and the pie charts illustrate the
number
 of
people
 who visited Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment and the results of surveys of visitor gratification during the same two periods. What stands out from the table is that after renovation the
number
 of
people
 has increased by 18
thousands
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thousand
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, from 74.000 to 92.000. What stands out from the pie charts is that before reconstruction the
number
 of
people
 was at 15%, and in the next year, it increased by almost
a
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one quarter, to 35%.
Likewise
, satisfied ones
has
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 increased by
one tenth
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, from 30% to 40%.
However
, dissatisfied humanity plunged to 15%.
Moreover
, the
number
 of very dissatisfied ones halved, from 10% to 5%. And,
finally
,
people
 who had no response
has
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remained at 5%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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