The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of men and women in higher education in Britain of two study types, consisting of full-time and part-time education from three different periods. As shown from the graph,

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both males and females had the same slightly upward trend of part-time education during the period,

while

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the data for the full-time study had different patterns for both genders. Looking in more detail, In 1970 there were almost 1000 male permanent

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declined near to 800 before it increased slightly to 900.

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, permanent female

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always rose from the initial value and reached a peak of over 1100

at the end

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of

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the period

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. Other than that, the changes

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part-time

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not significant to the entire

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. In total, there were only about 400 that were recognized as semi-permanent

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in each time frame from both genders.