Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for ordinary people?

Nowadays small businesses are vanishing and being changed by large multinational

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tendency, the impact on people has good

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advantages

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tendency. On the one hand, replacing

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large multinational

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brings us more workplaces and standardization for all goods and services. Surely, relating with these types of

companies

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always need new workers to perform determined

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to

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employees

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allowance money and all of them enhance their

standart

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standard

of living.

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multinational

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give new standardization for all these types of facilities. Goods quality more reliable and

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durable

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,replacement small businesses have bad impacts.

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could say when

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want to apply

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companies

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,they have to pass an internship or

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educational

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degree to apply for

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job and

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is a big problem for the

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case

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employees

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face issues

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a job in these types of

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companies

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new

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created

companies

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affect

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the values

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values

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value

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of goods in

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bad way.New rules,

standardizations

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and standardizations

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bring new prices with them.Surely, all these prices

aren't

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decreased,

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life quality is

decrased

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decreased

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tendency. In conclusion,nowadays small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational

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situation, the

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on people not only

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good

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