Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.   Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The issue of which factor will provide more benefits in daily life has sparked considerable debate, with some people arguing that

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will be more beneficial

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others believe that

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is the best choice.

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there is some

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behind the latter perspective, I personally agree more with the former view.

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with, it is understandable why some people support

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. A primary reason is

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moderate

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will drive

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technological and social development, as

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approach can inspire more innovations and creatives, making it a logical choice in certain

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. In detail, the international

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of space exploration

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various rockets and spaceships to be invented.

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, many argue that over-

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will cause a series of problems that influence

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economy

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development and social stability.

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,

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will result in factories

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production to decrease the price of

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for beating

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competitors. It will make a large number of factories

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and mass unemployment.

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, I would argue that

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is more reasonable and offers broader applications. A significant rationale is, nowadays, most

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in companies and factories

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teamwork

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because the individual capacity and power

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limited and

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with each other, which can improve the efficiency in work and the ability to deal with difficulties.

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, the

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between different sectors in production

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manufacturers can produce more goods and improve the commodity’s quality to some extent.

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,

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cooperation

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can promote the relationship between each other and enhance the sense of belonging in collectives to create a more peaceful environment for the society. In conclusion,

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competition

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has logical grounds and

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specific needs, I believe that

cooperation

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provides a more practical and balanced approach. Embracing

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view could lead to more adaptable and comprehensive results.