The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The chart illustrates the proportion living in urban areas in Argentina, Brazil,
Uruguay
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and Ecuador from 1970 to 2020 and a prediction for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, All 4 countries have shown
growth
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in population albeit at different rates. At the beginning of the period,
Uruguay
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and Ecuador citizens living in cities were one-fifth.
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, by 2020 Ecuador
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shown a steady increase and it reached approximately 70%.
Uruguay
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on the other hand
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, was at its peak overcoming other countries with more than 90% inhabitants in cities. The two countries will stand by 80% and 95% people in cities by 2040, making
Uruguay
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will become the most populated city. Argentina's citizens population in 1970 was around 70% and within a fifty-year time period, we observed decent
growth
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, taking the rate to 90% in the year 2020.
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, We will see a very slow
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of approximately 3% in the next 20 years. Brazil habitants living in urban areas were half in 1970 and even after the depletion of the rate in the 1990s, the population in 2020 was 85%. From 2020 to 2040 they underwent the same
growth
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as Argentina, taking its percentage to above 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uruguay, growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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