The table below shows the production of milk in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010
The given chart delineates the production of milk, in a period of 10 years, from 1990 to 2010, in 4 countries.
On the whole,
while
Linking Words
Netherlands
, Tanzania and Guatemala seemed to experience an increase throughout the period, with Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Netherlands
Correct article usage
the Netherlands
was
at the top place, the opposite is true for Australia.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, Linking Words
Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
produced the most, about 11,262,000 litres, in 1990. Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
Then
, it dropped to 11,155,000 just to bounce back Linking Words
at
11,466,000 in 2010. Australia, though its figure slightly Change preposition
to
decline
from 11 to 9 million, in 1990 and 2010, respectively, still remained the second-most production country when it comes to milk.
Regarding the statistics of Tanzania and Guatemala, the former was tripling the latter, at 87,000 and 26,000. Wrong verb form
declined
While
Guatemala saw an upward trend, Linking Words
ended
up at 84,000, Correct word choice
and ended
the
similar pattern was seen in Tanzania, with its final figure was 68 thousand larger than the previous one – 155,000.Correct article usage
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