Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe that it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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of courses available in tertiary institutions

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a tempting incentive for many students to investigate them as a hobby. Many argue

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will arm them with a more comprehensive toolkit

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others, including me, believe that college students ought to concentrate on their particular path if they desire a bright future. On the one hand, having the opportunity to broaden your perspective through studying a variety of formal subjects can be advantageous. The merits can represent themselves in terms of practicality and higher status in society and among friends,

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. Owing to the vast

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of knowledge acquired,

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group will develop an ability to analyse daily

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meticulously by adopting a holistic approach.

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distinguished characteristic will give them a special status among others who will regard them as geniuses and tremendous pragmatic figures.

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, others, like me, argue that acquiring in-depth knowledge of any specific field of science or the arts is the key

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being recognised as a professional in the nation. If you witness a leaking pipe,

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, would you search for the guy with the highest skill or someone who knows something

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of fields? Meanwhile,

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group vehemently refuses the functionality of a narrow depth but broad

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of information and

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wholeheartedly recommends students to perfect their field and become masters

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everybody would look for

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their competencies. In conclusion,

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gathering a marginal amount of practical information on other subjects could be entertaining and provide a higher social status among relatives, the second group, including myself, argue that concentrating on a single field is paramount.

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, everybody will have a profession in the future and only those with perfect competencies, merits and aptitudes will achieve their dreams and flourish in both personal and professional life.