Today more countires import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the adventages and disadvantages of this trend. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the rise of globalization in the past two decades, more and more
countries
choose to buy Use synonyms
food
from other Use synonyms
countries
rather than Use synonyms
producing
their own meals. It is often the case that Wrong verb form
produce
food
importers are higher-income Use synonyms
countries
and those with fewer resources for Use synonyms
argriculture
Correct your spelling
agriculture
while
Linking Words
food
suppliers are lower-income Use synonyms
countries
and those with richer natural and human resources in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
food
production industry. In Add an article
the food
this
essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of the Linking Words
food
import trend for both the import Use synonyms
countries
and the export Use synonyms
countries
.
For the exporters, selling their agricultural Use synonyms
produces
abroad is a strategic way to increase their income levels in a short to medium time period. Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
For example
, Linking Words
Vietnam
has been among the top Use synonyms
rice
exporters for many years, Use synonyms
along with
Thailand. Linking Words
Such
Linking Words
large
amount of exported Correct article usage
a large
rice
allows Use synonyms
Vietnam
to bring back giant revenue for Use synonyms
rice
growers and traders, keeping the lives of millions of farmers stable across fluctuations Use synonyms
of
the economy. Change preposition
in
While
other economies suffered from the Linking Words
Covid-19
pandemic, Correct your spelling
COVID-19
Vietnam
still flourished thanks to its strength in Use synonyms
rice
production and export activities.
Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
such
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advantage
does not come without a cost. Correct article usage
an advantage
While
quantity results in big numbers in terms of revenue, quality is the ultimate factor that leads to sustainable success. Because Vietnamese farmers rely too much on exporting raw Linking Words
produces
, they do not gain from the added Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
values
from the whole process of Fix the agreement mistake
value
food
production, starting from Use synonyms
high quality
cultivation to well-branded consumer products. Add a hyphen
high-quality
For example
, Linking Words
Vietnam
is the top exporter when it comes to robusta Use synonyms
coffee
. Use synonyms
However
, you might never see a bag of Vietnamese Linking Words
coffee
when you visit a foreign store. Use synonyms
That is
because the Linking Words
coffee
inside has been packaged and branded outside by another well-recognized name. Without a good brand name, Vietnamese Use synonyms
coffee
remains underpriced, and we Use synonyms
do not
make more money without having to work harder on the field.
For the importers, importing Verb problem
cannot
food
outside is good because they do not need to do what they are not good at. Use synonyms
For example
, the UK is good at innovative technology and financial consulting business, so they can just focus on these industries, leaving Linking Words
food
for other Use synonyms
countries
to take care of. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, dependency on Linking Words
outside
supply of Correct article usage
the outside
food
can put the country in a precarious situation if there is a global crisis that prevents normal transportation activities from happening.
In conclusion, global Use synonyms
food
trade provides both opportunities and challenges to Use synonyms
Use synonyms
countries
involved. Correct article usage
the countries
While
importers are at risk of Linking Words
food
security and reduced authorship in their own Use synonyms
food
resources, exporters are sacrificing their quality for Use synonyms
quantity
of export and undervalued consumer Correct article usage
the quantity
food
products. To embrace the benefits of global Use synonyms
food
trade, both sides need to balance their supply and consumption.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Your essay effectively addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of importing food, but ensure every point is clearly tied back to the main question. For example, explicitly mention how each point impacts the economies or societies of the exporting/importing countries.
coherence cohesion
Build more seamless transitions between paragraphs, especially when shifting from exporters' to importers' points. This can help improve the overall flow of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Excellent introduction and conclusion that clearly outline the essay's main points and summarize the discussion effectively.
task achievement
Your essay includes relevant and specific examples that enhance your arguments, such as examples from Vietnam and the UK.
coherence cohesion
The essay maintains a clear and logical structure throughout, making it easy to follow your points and understand your analysis.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.