The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
The line graph compares the 3 sources that contribute to
air
pollution
in the UK over 15 years, starting from 1990.
Overall
, it is clear that
the total air
pollution
retarded significantly over time except for transportation services. Furthermore
, industrial pollution
is the main contributor to air
pollution
.
In 1990, approximately 5.4 million
tonnes
of industrial waste contributed to pollution
. However
, this
value
dramatically declined over the next 6 years and reached 3 million
tonnes
. Thereby, it continued to further
decrease and ended as 2 million
tonnes
of industrial waste in 2005.
On the contrary
, transport and household pollutants followed a trend with slight fluctuations. In 1990, almost 0.5 million
tonnes
of transportation pollutants were exposed to the environment and followed an uptrend by 0.5 million
tonnes
. Next,
it downtrended and reached its original value
in 1999. Finally
, it almost doubled the starting value
in 2005 whereas
residential waste overall
dropped minorly to just below the starting value
in 2005. Moreover
, the total air
pollutants released decreased more than 2 folds.Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on
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