People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than those who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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simply use other
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or works are less valuable than
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who do their works with their capability and create original
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. Only integrated
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can do
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thing. I, personally, could not agree more that
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who rely on their ability to do their own tasks or have fresh
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are really a dedicated
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.
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by analysing my personal experience when made a
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my sister when did her assignment at campus. To start with, every
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need
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an original
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to make the
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more interesting by making a new concept. To
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, me and my team have a job as
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planners. At that time, I came
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my own
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to add a new guest star.
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, my friend stole my
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. Because she
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not know how to execute the
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, the
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was
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failed.
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, it is very important to use our own
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instead
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of using
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idea
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campus
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to not
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plagiarism, either on
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homework
or exams.
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, my sister
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an
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to solve
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problem of floods in Yogyakarta by using 3R (Reduce, Reuse, Recycle).
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, her friend
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that
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for another problem but still in
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same lecture. When her lecturer knew about it, my sister's friend got an E on her final report. It indicates that
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people
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ideas
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is not good to show integrity. As seen above,
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who have original
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are more appreciated in
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society than copying other
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.
This
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our
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on our
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own capability and ability.
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others
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work.
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coherence cohesion
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introduction conclusion present
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supported main points
Support your main points with more detailed and relevant examples. This will help in making your arguments more convincing and comprehensive.
clear comprehensive ideas
Avoid grammatical mistakes and improve your vocabulary to enhance the clarity and precision of your ideas.
task achievement
You have provided personal examples to support your points. This adds a personal touch and makes your argument more relatable.
introduction conclusion present
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your main points, reinforcing the idea that original ideas are more valuable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Intellectual property
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural evolution
  • Adaptation
  • Diverse perspectives
  • Historical impact
  • Education systems
  • Rote learning
  • Critically evaluate
  • Status quo
  • Foster
  • Imitation
  • Dissemination
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