The maps below show the town of Riverport in 1900 and 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the town of Riverport in 1900 and 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the maps depict
that
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apply
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the difference
of
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the town of Riverport in
tow
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two
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period
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periods
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, 1900 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the particular building in 1900 and green forest were eliminated and decreased,
while
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the traffic systems were developed over time. In 1900, there
are
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were
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timber
mill
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mills
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and
shipbuilder
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shipbuilders
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on
upper
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the upper
an upper
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side
in
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of
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the map,
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however
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however,
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in2000
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in 2000
, they were eliminated and erected two champing
site
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sites
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.
Moreover
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from 1900 to 2000, the warehouse was changed to
art
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an art
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gallery near the river.
Furthermore
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, the green forest and wharves
were
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declined
to
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by
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one-third.
However
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, there
are
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has been
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big
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a big
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growing
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growth
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over the period of time.
Firstly
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, the main road was extended four times on the west side of the town.
Additionally
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,
big
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a big
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riverside park was established under the river.
Finally
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, the railway was developed on the downside of
map
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the map
a map
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in 2000. Regarding the location of no-change, there are two
some place
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someplace
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,
town
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the town
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center
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centre
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and farmland,
those
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which
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have never changed both location and size over time.
And the
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The
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location of
main
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the main
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road, river and forest
were
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was
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not changed in 1900. And 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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