The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000. andthe martial status of adult Americans in two of the years

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The bar charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000 in 10-year intervals,

along with

the marital status of American

adults

in 1970 and 2000.

Overall

, the number of marriages declined significantly,

while

the divorce rate remained steady by the end of the period. Married individuals made up the largest proportion of

adults

whereas

divorced

adults

were the smallest group. From 1970 to 1990, the number of marriages remained relatively stable at 2.5

million

, but by 2000,

this

figure had dropped to 2

million

. The divorce rate began at 1

million

in 1970, peaked at almost 1.5

million

in 1980, and

then

fell back to 1

million

by 2000. In terms of marital status, 70% of

adults

were married in 1970, but

this

dropped to 60% by 2000. Widowed individuals accounted for 8% in 1970, slightly decreasing to 7% in 2000. The percentage of those who had never married increased from 15% to 20%,

while

the divorced population remained the smallest, rising from 3% to 9%. In summary, marriage rates decreased over time,

while

divorce levels remained constant, and the proportion of never-married and divorced

adults

grew.

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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000. andthe martial status of adult Americans in two of the years

Economic progress is often used to measure a country’s success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country’s success? Which one do you think is the most important?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Employers should focus on personal qualities instead of qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words.

It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

The two layouts illustrate the current situation of norbition industrial area and its coming changes which may happen in the following years ,as it can be seen in the maps,there is going to be a vast varition in general structure of this zone in its future plan.