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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country
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electrical
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the electrical
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device
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 and
amount
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the amount
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 of time
use
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 a
houswork
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housework
 in
housholds
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households
 in one country from 1920 to 2019.
overall
,
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,
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 In 1920 the
propotion
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proportion
promotion
 of
refrigetator
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refrigerators
 and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 were 2% and 30% respectively.
However
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 the washing machine was the higher percentage among them. The refrigerator From 1920 to 1960 raised
signiticanty
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significance
.
Then
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increase
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 slightly to
arrived
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to
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 100% in 1980. After the rate remained constant. 2o years from 1980 to 2000. We
also
 observed that The vacuum cleaner continued
grew
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 from 1920 to 1980 and the
precentage
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percentage
percentages
 were 30% and 90% respectively.
while
 In 1980 the
propation
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probation
proportion
 climbed slowly to
2000
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 year. The rate
among
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between
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 2000 and 2019 was unchanged
100
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at 100
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% . The
seconed
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second
 line graph showed
nemper
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number
temper
member
 of
hourse
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hours
 per week
through
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between
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 1920 and 2019. In 1920,
the
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housework was very high , but the
precentange
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percentage
 decline considerable to
approximatly
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approximately
 20%.
subsequently
, the
house work
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housework
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decreas
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decrease
decreased
 gradually to arrived 10% In 201a.
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