The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of world
illiteracy
rates in last
year, separated Correct article usage
the last
in
groups by region and gender.
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into
Overall
, highest
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the highest
illiteracy
rate
is in South Asia
, while
the lowest illiteracy
rate
is on
developed countries. Change preposition
in
Females
illiteracy
rate
is higher than males
. Some regions has
big gaps between Change the verb form
have
males
and females
like East Asia
/Oceania, while
some regions has
smaller gaps between Change the verb form
have
males
and females
like Latin American
/Caribbean.
South Replace the word
America
Asia
has the highest illiteracy
rate
by
more than 50% Change preposition
with
on
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of
females
and more than 30% on
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of
males
. After South Asia
, the second highest illiteracy
rate
belongs to Arab States with approximately 50% in females
and almost 30% on
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in
males
.
Females
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Females'
Female's
illiteracy
rate
is higher than males
on
every region. Latin American/Caribbean has the lowest male and female Change preposition
in
illiteracy
rate
gap, both male and female illiteracy
rate
is around 10%. However
East Add a comma
However,
Asia
/Oceania has the highest gap between male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
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females
on
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in
illiteracy
rate
with under 10% on
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for
males
and 20% on
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for
females
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rate, asia, females, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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