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The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares what percentage of each age group has drinking habits among the population of the United States. As shown there, most of the
people
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 in every category are never drinkers. Getting back to the details, the total percentages of never-drinking
people
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 vary between 50 and 65 per cent in any age except elderly
people
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, whose ages are above 65
years
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 old. But only 44 per cent of them have never drunk. Ex-drinkers among
people
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 between 16 and 54
years
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 are under 10 per cent of the population,
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 in other groups like 55-64 and 65-74,
this
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 amount can be reached at 22% and 43% respectively.
People
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 who drink much represent over 10 % of the ages of 35 to 54. But the other 4 groups under 34 and over 55 have only 4-8% heavy-drinking
people
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. Light drinkers are 25% of the population of the first group: 16-24 agers, but starting after 25
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, the proportion of
this
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 category is slightly decreasing from 32% to 9%, and becoming as less as elderly. By cause of the given information, it is possible to make it clear that after 65
years
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, the never drank
people
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’s amount is probably equal to the number of
people
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 who have ceased drinking
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Drinking habits
  • Population demographics
  • Age group/bracket
  • Alcohol consumption
  • Frequency of drinking
  • Heavy drinking
  • Moderate drinking
  • Teetotaler
  • Legal drinking age
  • Societal norms
  • Trends over time
  • Underage drinking
  • Alcohol abuse
  • Health implications
  • Statistical data
  • Comparative analysis
  • Bar chart/Line graph
  • Binge drinking
  • Responsibility in drinking
  • Age-specific patterns
  • Cross-generational comparison
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