The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar graph depicts information about the number of

heart

attacks

in the USA based on gender (

men

and

women

) and

age

groups.

Overall

, it is evident that

men

have greater numbers of

heart

attacks

across all

age

groups and it exhibits a positive correlation between

heart

health's number with

age

groups.

To begin

with,

men

shows

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the number of 123000

cases

of

heart

attacks

in the

age

group

of 29-44,

whereas

women

is

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have

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only 3000

cases

in

this

group

.

Then

, both figures significantly climb to 424000 and 136000

cases

of

heart

attacks

for

men

and

women

, respectively, in the

age

group

of 45-64.

Furthermore

, the figure

revelead

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reveals

that as people

aged

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age

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, their

heart

health's

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health

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quality

also

reduce

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reduces

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. In

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the eldery

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eldery

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elderly

group

,

while

men

's figure gradually rises to 440000

of

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apply

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heart

attack

case

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cases

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,

women

's figure sharply grows to

be

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apply

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twice from

previous

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the previous

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age

group

, amounting to 374000

of

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apply

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heart

attack

cases

.