The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates how to produce a kind of biofuel named
ethanol
and its relevant carbon cycle. It's obvious that there are 5 stages in the manufacturing process of making Use synonyms
ethanol
, these mainly contain harvesting and pre-processing the original Use synonyms
plants
, chemical processing and adding microbes to sugars.
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and trees that have already grown are harvested by machines and Use synonyms
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poured into the pulverizers for pre-processing. After that, these Linking Words
plants
are converted into small pieces of cellulose 3rd stage. In the following Use synonyms
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4, the materials that come from the Use synonyms
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are sent into the factories for chemical processing, with the output of sugar for Use synonyms
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steps.
Once the sugar is made, some specific microbes are added to them in the 5th Linking Words
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Finally
, under the effects of relevant chemical reactions, Linking Words
ethanol
is produced and used as fuel for both land and air transportation. Use synonyms
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, these vehicles burn Linking Words
ethanol
and emit carbon dioxide, the latter is Use synonyms
then
converted into energy with the effect of sunlight for Linking Words
plants
and trees .Use synonyms
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