The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates how to produce a kind of biofuel named
ethanol
and its relevant carbon cycle. It's obvious that there are 5 stages in the manufacturing process of making
ethanol
, these mainly contain harvesting and pre-processing the original
plants
, chemical processing and adding microbes to sugars. At the first
step
of the process,
plants
and trees that have already grown are harvested by machines and
then
poured into the pulverizers for pre-processing. After that, these
plants
are converted into small pieces of cellulose 3rd stage. In the following
step
4, the materials that come from the
last
step
are sent into the factories for chemical processing, with the output of sugar for
further
steps. Once the sugar is made, some specific microbes are added to them in the 5th
step
.
Finally
, under the effects of relevant chemical reactions,
ethanol
is produced and used as fuel for both land and air transportation.
In addition
, these vehicles burn
ethanol
and emit carbon dioxide, the latter is
then
converted into energy with the effect of sunlight for
plants
and trees .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, plants, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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