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Band 7.5

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you have a good day! I am writing
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 letter because I accidentally forgot my
bag
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 on the flight that I took a few days ago. A couple of days ago, I took a flight from Beijing to London. When I arrived at my hotel, I found that I didn't have one of my bags. The
bag
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 I have forgotten is a red
bag
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 and inside of my
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, it includes two T-shirts,three books and a personal document. The personal document is extremely important to me because I do not have a copy of it.
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, I have to give
this
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 document to my boss
at the end
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 of the month.
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, I really need your help to locate my backpack. And if is possible, would you mind sending it back to me, please? I hope that it does not cause too much inconvenience for you. I really appreciate
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 you could reply as soon as possible. Best wishes, Sincerely

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task achievement
You provided a clear explanation of what happened and described the bag and its contents effectively. Ensure you maintain the tone consistently formal throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure, but make sure every paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The letter clearly explains what happened regarding the forgotten bag, providing sufficient detail.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate for the formal letter style required by the task.
task achievement
The contents and importance of the bag were well described, giving a personal touch and highlighting urgency.
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