The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial place now and a prediction of that area after updates.

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, there are new buildings which are planned to

construct

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and a bridge with a new road in the south part of the town. Now,

town

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the town

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has

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does

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not

got

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any public-used buildings except accommodations and roads.

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, the small rural area has a

river

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in

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the top of

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map

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with farmland crossing a

river

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.

However

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, the government planned to build a school in the east part of the

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, which is connected by

path

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for housing areas .

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, the playgrounds are located under the

river

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, near the school. In the

center

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of the

map

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and in the south part of the

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, there are square paths. Between them, builders plan to construct a medical

center

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and shops. A new bridge

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is planed

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planed

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planned

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to build crossing the

river

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in the centre.

Lastly

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, farmland is changed location and placed bit Easter than

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the

then