The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
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The graph chart illustrates the information about average spending of income per week by families in one area between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the expenditure on food has become less.
On the other hand
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, people started to spend much more
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leisure. Fuel and power are the most unnecessary things.
Firstly
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, the spending on meals and food has become less, from 35% to 17%.
Furthermore
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, leisure and housing improved from 10% to 18% and 22%;
due to
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that, they overcame the first and second place. Spending on transport was the third and
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necessity that developed and reached 14% from 8%.
Secondly
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, household goods and personal goods were with the same indexes, accurately 8%. The first one hadn't changed, meanwhile, the second one decreased to 4%.
However
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, in 1968 clothing and footwear were some of the most imported things, in 2018, they fell by 5%. Fuel and power remained with the worst attention for families and dropped from 6% to 4%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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